Recently we have been asked to retell a story about the naming of a place in the Muriwhenua area as an animation or story. I chose Tokerau - a small place on the northern East Coast on the Karikari Peninsula.
Nice work bayden. I really liked how you told the story in your own words and made it funny. I also liked how you fixed your mistake. I think you should make another one because you are good at it. Do you want to make another one and why.
Nice work bayden. I really liked how you told the story in your own words and made it funny. I also liked how you fixed your mistake. I think you should make another one because you are good at it. Do you want to make another one and why.
ReplyDeleteHi Cohen,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback, you have really ruffled my feathers. I will make another one. I will look at your blog soon.
Bye.